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SonicRanger the Enchantress
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A teen who loves Scourge the Hedgehog, vampires, and writing fiction novels!
My stories on DeviantArt are a way to test my abilities as a writer on the public, so comments are greatly appreciated!
I also love music! I have no certain kind of music I enjoy! I love from christian rock to beautiful and spooky songs to dance music to old school classics to so much more!

Also, you can find me on Fanfiction.net! You can check out my Sgt. Frog/Keroro Gunso fanfics there! www.fanfiction.net/s/9669026/1…
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I have been having a fair bit of trouble writing lately. You see, I am trying to become a novelist, but I can't get published. I can't help wondering if perhaps I'm just not that good a writer after all. Yes, people tell me my fanfics are good, but they're not mine. They are based on characters and worlds I didn't create, characters and worlds people already like.
I want to create my own characters and worlds for people to love and enjoy. Sadly, because of the people in the world that would steal my precious creations, I can't risk posting anything of them online. I couldn't bare to lose some of my novels. I've worked too long and hard to lose them now.

So, to help me get a bigger audience, I decided to post small sneak peeks of some smaller novels I'm working on or have finished. Just to give people a taste of my original work. Think of it as a "resume" of sorts, showing what I am capable of. Do take a look at them and let me know what you think. Any comments would be a huge help.

Here are a few I posted today.

My Guardian Demon - Sneak PeekPrologue - I Want the Kitty with the Wings!
    She walked into the house with a big smile, "Welcome to your new home, kitty!"
I looked out from the cat carrier. It was a pretty simple house. Lots of yellow and tan.
The little girl spoke again as she walked into what must have been the kitchen, "This is where we make food!"
She turned and ran up the stairs. That wasn't pleasant, seeing as she shook the carrier pretty good. My claws were deep in the floor of the carrier by the time we reached the top of the stairs. Someone was clearly too young to be allowed to have a pet.
She opened a door and hurried inside. I just had to groan when I saw the room. It was nothing but white with little silver stars painted on the walls and ceiling. Figures I would end up in a big white room again. I could not escape it!
The little girl sat down the carrier, though it was much too hard. My vision doubled as she opened the door and reached in for me. I had originally wanted to swa
Lynette and the 12 Dragon-Breeds - Sneak PeekChapter 1 - Part of the Family
Chapter 1.1 - A Single Maiden
     She ran as fast as she could through the dark woods. She was terrified, not of the shadows that seemed to jump out at her, but of the figure that chased her. Her red cloak hooked branches as she ran, but she continued to pull away. Though, she finally was caught by a tangle of branches that refused to let go, so she pulled the cloak off and kept running.
Rain continued to pour down as lightning lit up the dark sky. Her hair hung wet in her face and her clothes were torn and dirtied as she hurried through thick bushes and tall grasses. She even fell into waist deep swamp water. She waded quickly to the other side and hurried on.
She gasped as she lost her footing and slide down a very steep hillside. She saw the cliff at the bottom and managed to grab a branch. She looked down to see a terrible fall into a river that turned rapid from all the pouring rain. Water poured down the hillside
I Am Ai Vigilante - Sneak Peek1. Patient Number 7-13
   Dr. Christopher Wilder watched in silence. He watched a single person in the big white room by himself. There was a TV, a sound system hooked up to a stereo, and white pieces of furniture.
The single person was a lanky boy in maybe his late teens to early twenties with spiked black hair that was bleached at the ends, though the left side of his head was shaved short. His spiked hair hung down in his face, almost hiding his right violet eye. He wore a white t-shirt, white sweatpants, and white tennis shoes without laces. A silver band was around his right wrist with a series of letters and numbers
He sat in front of the couch on the floor, leaning back against it as he flipped through channels on the TV with the little white remote. Each channel had children's shows, all happy and friendly.
He looked emotionless, flipping over and over through the few channels he was given. He didn't stop his little cycle for even a moment. Dr. Christoph



I may add more in the future if this little test run works in giving me some feedback on my writing. I've met some writers who have gotten their work published, so advice from others who know what its like is welcome too.
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  • Listening to: Locked Away by R City
  • Reading: Proofreading my novels
  • Eating: Little Debbie's snack
  • Drinking: Water

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Book 1 : The Black Heart Murder

Chapter 1 ~ Letter from a friend

   Dear Fakhir,

Hey, old friend. Its been a while. I bet you're surprised to hear from me after all these years.
Listen, I have something I need you to do for me. See, I work a job in a place called Midnight Meadow. A simple, quiet little place.
Well, something came up. I have to leave for a while, but I kinda worry about my companions. Someone has to keep an eye on them for me. I only trust you for that.
No, I'm not asking you to babysit. I just would appreciate it if you would stay close to them while I'm gone. They tend to get themselves into trouble and I'm the one who always gets them out. I need you to watch them for me. Ok?
Well, I don't know if you'll do it or not, but I'm really hoping you will. I even bought you a train ticket. Hopefully its still with this letter. If you're still where I think you are, it should be about a three hour ride by train. Once you get there, look for the address on the card I left you.
I'm sure you'll do fine. The job will be easy for you. I remember you liked that kind of thing.
If you do this for me, thanks.

                        Sincerely,
                                  Donyx


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  I sighed as I looked from the letter to the small violet card. Red ribbons formed the words Midnight Meadow Detectives. I sighed, walking through the little town in a big, open grassland, Leave it to Donyx to get me in with detectives.
I looked at the shops along the cobblestone street. Little restaurants had tables sitting out in front, where couples were eating under the moonlight. The street was lit by shop windows, light pouring out on those who passed by.
I reached the end of the shops to see a single little two-story cottage with a sign written in the same ribbon words as the card. It was cute, which made me curious about who I was meeting. Just how did someone like Donyx end up in a place like this?
I opened the door, which rung a small bell. I walked into a small front office. A single door led into the rest of that floor while a staircase climbed the right wall just past the front desk. Five chairs sat along the wall next to the door. Very simple, very quiet. I decided that moment to make sure I asked Donyx what he was doing in a place like that when I saw him.
I closed the door behind me and walked up to the desk. I noticed the little gold bell and tapped it. The little "ding" rung fairly loud.
Then the door at the back was opened. A petite girl with black hair and dark skin walked out. Her brown eyes looked at me from behind a pair of red-rimmed glasses, "Yes? Can I help you?"
I cleared my throat, "Hi. I'm Fahkir. I'm old friends with Donyx. He works here."
The girl looked me over. She spoke softly, "Never seen him before."
I felt a little confused, "Are you sure?"
She looked at me, a little surprised, but shook it off, "Sorry, I wasn't talking to you."
I was confused, until I noticed something next to her. I could feel a presence there. I focused my mind and something hidden to the human eye appeared.
It was a boy. He wore a long black coat over black clothes. His jet-black hair hung in his eyes, which were bright red. Black gloves hid his hands, silver chains hung from his coat and sleeves, and he wore thick, black boots. The hood of his coat covered his head, almost shadowing his face. He had to be in maybe his early twenties, though I could assume that he, like myself, was much older than he looked. Looks meant nothing in this world.
I knew he had to be a Phantom. How I knew this? Obvious. Being a Vampire myself, only my kind could see them. It took some focus to see through the veil that separated the world of the living and the world of the dead, but once you did, you could always see and hear them.
I spoke, "He a friend of yours?"
She looked me over again before answering, "So you are a Vampire." She started looking through a drawer in the desk, "Yes, I can see him." She closed the drawer and looked at me, "And no, I am not a Vampire. I'm more Human-Based."
Human-Based. That would be Humans with a little something in their blood. What that something is exactly, from Vampire blood to something else's, is rarely known. Though, whatever it is, it's never enough to fully turn them, explaining why no one can be sure what's in their blood exactly. Personally, I'd never met a Human-Based person before. This one clearly had Vampire in her blood, or else she wouldn't have been able to see the Phantom.
The Phantom spoke, his voice echoing softly, "He mentioned Donyx. Perhaps he knows where he is."
I found that a little surprising. They didn't know where Donyx was? Didn't he let them know he was leaving?
She sighed, "Well, I guess if you're friends with Donyx, I can't just kick you out. Come on in." She headed to the back room. I followed her, slinging my bag over my shoulder.
I walked into the room and was surprised. It was very... girly. Hot pink curtains, matching rugs with black tiger stripes, black and pink beanbag chairs along with tiger-stripped mauve couches and chairs. Sure as heck not Donyx's style. Again, how'd he end up in that place?
A tall, lean guy was already there. I groaned as I looked him over. The stylish clothes, the posture he had across the couch, the immense amount of pink in his fashion. Drat. He was one of those guys.
He wore a long dark pink vest over a white shirt, long hot pink slacks, and a red fedora over his long white hair. Several rings decorated his fingers and what looked like gloss was on his lips.
He saw me and smiled, "Well, what a handsome young man!" I stopped in my tracks. What kind of messed-up lifestyle was Donyx living?!
He noticed my look and laughed like some prince charming, "He's almost as cute as Donyx! Even the same first impression!"
The girl sighed, "This is Fahkir. He says he's friends with Donyx."
The guy grinned, "Oh, perhaps he knows something of our missing compadre!"
I stayed where I was, "Actually, no, I don't. I just got a letter from him about an opening here. He figured I'd be some help." I decided it was better to keep the real reason Donyx wanted me to come to myself.
The girl looked me over, "He didn't tell you where he went or why?"
I shook my head, "Afraid not."
She sighed, looking a little disappointed, even a little worried, "Oh."
The guy on the couch stood up and strode over to her, laying his hands on her shoulders from behind, "There there, sweet Avery, fear not. I'm certain our princely Donyx will be just fine. He's not only a handsome devil, but he's also got a good head on his shoulders."
I found myself inching away from him with every word he said to decribe Donyx. He noticed and grinned. To my discomfort, he walked over. He gave a bow, "Greetings, young Fahkir. Welcome to our humble abode!"
I cleared my throat, staying back, "Uh, hey."
He smiled, "Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Estmund and our beloved leader is the beautiful Miss Avery."
So her name was Avery. Not the most relaxed type of girl I'd ever met. Even at that moment, she was watching me carefully. The phantom with her was thoughtful and silent, floating at her side.
I cleared my throat, "Well, is there still an opening?"
Avery looked me over, "I suppose. Only because we could use an assistant."
I was surprised, "Assistant? As in, cooking and cleaning?"
She shrugged, "More along the lines of running errands. You could cook and clean if you wanted to, but we already hire someone for that."
I'll admit I was ready to leave at that very moment. I didn't agree to do the job just to be some errand boy. Just who did Donyx think I was?
Then I thought about Donyx's letter. He clearly needed me to watch his companions. Of all the people he knew, he trusted me most to do the job. I just couldn't ignore that.
I sighed, "Fine. I'll take it."
Avery adjusted her glasses, "Good, you start..." Then the phone rang. She walked over to the phone next to the sofa, "Good evening, this is Avery of the Midnight Meadow Detectives. How may I help you?"
Estmund smiled at me as Avery listened to the person on the phone, "Here, I'll show you where you'll be staying. You can stay in Donyx's room for now."
I followed him out of the room.
I hoped, wherever Donyx was, he would be back soon. I had a ton of questions. Though, the first one would be where he went and why. From the looks of things, I could see I wasn't the only one who would want the answer to that.

Just where was Donyx?
The Midnight Meadow Detectives - Sneak Peek
One of my original stories to test my writing skills. I decided I needed a bigger audience than just my family for my actual novels. I always get nervous about posting my novels online because I worry someone will steal my ideas, but these ones aren't my best and they'll probably never get published, so I am willing to take the risk. I am hoping to get some feedback to help me see if my work is any good and maybe even create a name here on DA for when I ever do get my books published. 

It would really help my future as a novelist, so please help me out by commenting.

This is going to be my very first mystery novel, since I'm a bit of a mystery fanatic! =D Though, of course, it needed my fantasy twist of vampires and the such, so I think it will make for a pretty unique series. =)

WARNING: Do not even think of stealing my vampire style, because I do have different official people with my vampire stories and other works as proof that the style is mine. They will easily prove that the style is mine and I will pursue keeping it that way. I stress this because I take great pride in creating an original style of vampire, kinda like how "Twilight" did.

Do tell me what you think, what you like, what you don't like, and maybe what you'd like to see happen with it. Anything is very helpful! =D (Big Grin)
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Big Happy Family ~ Rai and Peachy by SonicRanger-1
Big Happy Family ~ Rai and Peachy
Here's my little Rai! He's a daddy! :squee: Oran is a boy and Rocky is a girl, just so you know. :giggle:

Quick little facts!

Rocky is actually named after Rai's dad, who I have to explain one of these days.
Rocky's real name is Rockalin, but she prefers her nickname.
Oran is also shiny, if you haven't noticed.
Rocky has one blue eye, which was the reason behind her being named after Rai's dad, who also had a blue eye.
Oran seems really shy when you first meet him, but he's far from it. He's actually more daring than his adventurous sister. Rocky may look like the little troublemaker, but the one Rai and Peachy really have to keep an eye on is Oran. :XD:

Original base by :iconBase-4-u:
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I can do a fanfic(ex. 1) or original story(ex. 3) for you in normal book style or chat room style(ex. 2). If you have trouble writing(maybe you're not English, or just no good with your grammar, or you just have trouble writing), I'll do the writing for you! I do this for some friends of mine and my sisters, so now I'm offering it to you! You give me the characters, the world I'm working with, the plot, and anything else you want in it, and I'll put it together for you into a story! 

Fanfictions I can do well:
Sonic
Pokemon
Sgt. Frog
There are others, but they should be noted to me first.

Genres I'll do:
Fantasy
Sci-Fi
Adventure
Romance

Each commission is up to three chapters or a one (long) short story. For anything shorter, note me.

No nudity, no language, no gore, no horror, no... naughty things. You know my work, you'll know my rules. No higher than PG13 from me.

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Heavier-Lobster Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Sorry if I'm bothering you, but did you get my note?
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SonicRanger-1 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I did, and there is nothing else I need. I got caught up the rest if the day, so I won't have more until tomorrow. =)
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Heavier-Lobster Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Okay. What about the note about the cigarette holder?
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SonicRanger-1 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I got it. I'll try to mention it a bit more in the future.
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DrawTwist Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2015  New Deviant Student Artist
Are you interested in writing the stories of what happened. I mean, you seemed to enjoy writing the story about Schreek alot and I Suck at writing stories.
So if you're interested, you could write more chapters about her. Like, why she's fighting Reggie and max.
(tbh... I haven't thought of why she fights Reggie, but I know it was something related to her friends, while Max did a horrible thing...) anyways, you like to write some chapters about her origin? I can tell how the plot is and you can write every detail exactly how you want!
Because I didn't see the fight being so awesome as it was in the page!
So, if interested, message me if you want to write her origin! :D ^^ :)
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chibelin Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015   General Artist
Thanks a lot for faving! >w0 <3
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SonicRanger-1 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Sure thing! I thought that pic was just too adorable! :love:
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DrawTwist Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  New Deviant Student Artist
Oh and thx alot for the fav!
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SonicRanger-1 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Sure thing! Keep up the good work! =D
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DrawTwist Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  New Deviant Student Artist
I will :D
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